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My next illustration is out! I got the idea from the way a comic book or manga looks like. So I decided to make this more a panel and practice some typography for my illustrations so I can better that in the future.
Just to let you know that this isn't anime related even though it may look kinda like one. I wanted to try something different with a suburban feel and have crisper lines than my usual organic style. The logo at the top-right of the image is something that I made up. It's something I'm working on for one of my print production classes for a soft-drink. I hope you enjoy this! Please offer any critique. Original size: 14"x28" at 300dpi Created in: Adobe Illustrator CS3 Comments
cool picture nice n simple
not sure bout the type at the bottom -- ~Carmania ~tuning-club ~Deviantwheels =AutomotiveClub Ok. You asked for it!
I like the rays and the color of the sky. I think that the grey border looks good with those colors but kind of overpowers them (the gold and green hues) and might work better if it was thinner because right now it's so dark it throws off the nice soft and simple colors of the piece. I'd also move the white over. I don't like how it straddles the picture and the grey. It's also a little big for my personal tastes but I can see how it'd be a nice balance for the thickness of the grey parts. I really like the bridge and the angle it's at against the curve of underneath the bridge. :3 It's a nice shape contrast. I like the texture you created with the little black parts. Not overdone, just right. I like that you balanced the left figure with the right and how he's standing and she's sitting. If thats their genders. I dunno. What's the shadow in the middle? Why doesn't the bridge have a small shadow? I kind of see how it might be in there but it's not obvious to me. I think in the water you should have the sky reflected. :3 But that's just an extra flair and I like it simple too. You know I'd like to see it without the grey. I think that's what throws me off the most. I understand why you added it and as padding but I see this image as simple in it's composition, it doesn't need the balancing or padding in my eyes. But that's just my personal taste. Still. My original comment stands with prettyyyyyyy <333 -- Lyme Disease: Do you know about it? Probably not, so read this and learn what you can do to spread the word. Are you CFS aware? |
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